I'm an amateur songwriter. Notice I did not include the words 'good' or 'talented' in that last statement. Most of what I write never gets heard by anyone, but that's not such a bad thing. Most of what I write is dreadful.
It's not the melodies or song structure that gives me trouble. I have a decent ear and understand the fundamentals of music theory (circle of fifths, anyone...?).
It's the lyrics. Those elusive bastards.
Song: Is There a Ghost?
Artist: Band of Horses
Album: Cease to Begin
*listen to it here
"I could sleep when I lived alone. Is there a ghost in my house?"
That's it. 14 words. And the song is really good. It's almost as if the repetition of lyrics is soothing. And it leaves a lot open to interpretation. Here's another great example:
Song: White Winter Hymnal
Artist: Fleet Foxes
Album: Fleet Foxes
*listen to it here
"I was following the pack all swallowed in their coats
with scarves of red tied 'round their throats
to keep their little heads from falling in the snow
and I turned 'round and there you go
and Michael, you would fall and turn the white snow red as strawberries in the summertime"
I once took a poetry class in college where I had to read and analyze all sorts of shit that I didn't like as much as that. That's imagery in lyrics at it's finest.
Well... I'll get back to trying lyrics now I suppose.
Must remember my mantra: "If my rhymes were a drug, I would sell them by the gram."
Word. to your mother.


